Black

Posted: August 30, 2009 in Poetry by Natasha Ramsey
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I love the dark;
At nighttime I’m best at remembering the taste of love
While shedding tears of what once was.

In the solitude of a cold, bare room,
I reminisce about the past and all that I miss.

Your warm embrace once called home
No longer greets my return
Instead loss of love and pain are the only emotions I own.

All Rights Reserved 2009 || Natasha Ramsey

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Comments
  1. Natasha, thank you for directing me to your site. I read this poem and it is beautiful!

  2. Coach Kevin says:

    Beautiful and touching.

  3. This moved me, seriously. Thank you for this.

  4. Thank you all so very much for reading, commenting and providing encouragement to keep writing (as if I could stop…)! It’s always wonderful to know that others enjoy my words and feel the emotion behind them.

    @ Cendrine: It’s great to connect with another poet who enjoys my work, especially since I love your writing! Thank you 🙂

    @ Kevin: Your kind words are appreciated (here and on FB!)

    @ Michele: I am humbled to know that this piece moved you; that is my ultimate goal – to touch at least one soul. Thank you for letting me know. Be blessed.

    Peace,
    Natasha

  5. Joe sanchez says:

    very nice, I like it although you can expand it further
    show more of the pain make it real grab me and twist my soul I want to feel it. Own it you can make it deeper and better i know you can.

    JASStudiosArt
    JAS

    • Thank you for reading and for the feedback, Joe! I really appreciate it!
      I tend to write longer pieces but recently decided to try a few shorter pieces. Maybe I’ll expand on it when the mood strikes to mix it up 🙂
      Are you on FB? I share other drafts there as well…

  6. This is lovely Natasha!
    Thanks for sharing 🙂

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